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Wielder of the sunglasses

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The KS Eisley Story


It was a warm night on dathomir where Ordie was gathering spider skin, when he got a call from Keeper, she was having trouble with a certain person called Deric Carter, Ordie Called on his Brother Audie the Elder jedi, Audie called on Other members of the KS jedi order, Menis and starket were the 1st to reply.

The 3 elder jedi's met at Amber ridge shuttle port, they soon caught the 1st shuttle to Mos eisley, when they arrived they made a swift run to the Cantina, Audie and stark made it inside, but the door shut, and locked. menis was outside, she began to meditate to try break the lock. This meant that Audie and Starkset were alone.

There they found a young entertainer, keeper, on the floor in distress, Audie and stark surrounded the Exiled jedi Deric and began to interrigate him, he was uncorroparative, so Audie and Starkset prepared themselve for a tough fight, Audie drew his light saber, but starkets lightsaber didnt turn on, it was just audie by himself.

Deric lit his saber, the fight began, the swords locked together, sending the entertainers hiding behind the bar, both of thier strengh started to decrease, when suddenly, Audie mis interpreted a move by deric, deric struck his lightsaber throught Audie's Stomach, Audie fell to the floor, not a flinch not one movement, he had fallen.

Now Starkset managed to get his saber to turn on, He surprised Deric with an attack from behind deric jumped over stark, and engaged in a battle for honer, stark was angered by the death of his team mate ,anger was flowing through him, but again deric distracted starkset and plunged his saber through starks chest, now there lie 2 Ks jedi on the floor.

Menis unlocks the door and see her fallen comrads, she light her saber launches forward and knocks deric to the floor, he lies on the floor trying to protect himself from menis's glancing blows, she was too strong for him, he dropped his saber and pleaded to menis for his life, menis raised her saber for a final blow when a another 2 exiled jedi called ryan and noto, attacks menis from behind, menis engages them leaving deric wimpering on the floor.

Audie has life in him yet! he gets up, see thats menis is in trouble and engageds noto in a lightsaber duel. Menis beheads noto in 1 swift slice, then out comes stark, and all 3 decend onto ryan, ryan had no chance against the 3 1st jedi in KS, the most knowladgeable of them all.

Then after ryan had fallen, all 3 ventured back into the cantina to find deric, but he was gone. Audie saw deric going out the exit, Audie follows him out, then deric stops, turns and lights his saber, Audie switches on his and goes into a defenceive position, the sabers clash, a fierce battle brakes out, but then halfway through menis appears out the door, lauching into deric, then shortly followed by starkset, all 3 use there knoledge to fight deric, then Audie stares deric in the eye and stabs his saber through derics heart, deric slowly falls to the floor.

Now all 3 KS jedi, stand around the corsps of the exiled Deric carter, breathing heavy, the young entertainer had been saved, but for how long, soon the bounty hunters would be after the 3 brave jedi elders, not knowing when or where or who...

-- Edited by audiem at 01:09, 2006-05-29

-- Edited by audiem at 16:34, 2006-05-29

-- Edited by audiem at 16:35, 2006-05-29

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very interesting.. just one thing is missing... paragraphs :P

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lol

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Wielder of the sunglasses

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well i got an E in my english exam :p :D so shuuush :p

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hehe.. only kidding mate.

nice to hear that the Deric fanclub has a few more members

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lol nice story :D


but uuuh


but the door shut, and locked. menis was outside, she began to meditate to try break the lock. This meant that Audie and Starkset were alone.


doesn't this mean menis was alone and not u2 as u were toghter.


and deric did ask why certain ppl of KS didn't like him guess this is what he was talking about :D



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Wielder of the sunglasses

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well im not very good at writing stories :p

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alastrina wrote:


..and deric did ask why certain ppl of KS didn't like him guess this is what he was talking about :D




This just goes to prove that he has a memory problem and no thoughts or cares as to whether his actions offend or annoy others.. roleplay or not.. hes a @$%^£@

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Very well done audie i like it



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I would like to point out that this story is based on actual events and that no animals were harmed in the making of this story


Beyond the spelling, grammer & punctuation errors, it's a good story Audie



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Yes mate.. a good story indeed.. I didn't mean to offend with my paragraphs comment.. sorry :sorry:

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hehe nice audie.

But anything else.

1st. Dont think i like deric but iam not i trouble with him. Audie asked me 4 times " Ure friedly with him" ( or anything like this ). So i thought it wasnt nice from u to ask me 4 Times and avoid to me like a criminal.

Iam a person who isnt serching trouble. i dont like it. for sure sometimes there is no other way. I talked to Deric and he told me "his Story" well i know the other one too. And hmm it wasnt nice from both sites. I think to talk about thigs is much better than flaming.

Is there a real big reason for a conflict i'll be at KS site. But note iam allways looking to both sites.

Iam not happy about audie how he was talking to me! But whatever



edit: i Know its maybe hard to read / understand this text. If u cant read it :/ iam sorry

*g* ure Nix

-- Edited by Nixy at 14:45, 2006-05-30

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Wielder of the sunglasses

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well nixy i asked you 4 times coz u didnt reply to any of them apart from the last time iasked

and plus you doidnt hear what he said to keeper

Nor did you hear what he said About KS

And nor did you hear what he said to me and about me



-- Edited by audiem at 18:34, 2006-05-30

-- Edited by audiem at 18:34, 2006-05-30

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*grabs Nixy & Audie*
*makes them kiss and make up*

*writes an /addignores Deric & MR guild macro*
*distributes to all who need it*

*hugs everyone*
*/wedgies Nixy*
*/noogie Audie*

*backs away from situation safe in the knowledge I have done all in my power*



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lol

if the translation correct i have to /slap Jibb


*/wedgies Nixy*

http://dict.leo.org/ende?lp=ende&p=/gQPU.&search=wedgie


the link for the translation :P

and its ok i only wanted to say what i didnt like :) /shakehands AUDI Quadro

/giggle jib

:p

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/wedgie is when you pull the waist of someones undercrackers up while they are wearing them.

/atomicwedgie is when you manage to get the waistband right over thier head

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qh ok than was the translation right

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Okay... after months of the Deric deal and his recent return to annoying certain people, I'm going to explain the actual events depicted in this story. This is for the benefit of those who don't know Deric yet, it may give some a perspective of why some people don't like him.

1) Keeper (ex KS member) was friends with a player (male) who was in real life married to another player who had an entertainer character in ME cantina. It appears the female became friends with Deric at some point and told him a tale about her husband being abusive, etc. (personaly i don't think bringing people you play a game with into your personal problems is a good idea)

2) Deric took it upon himself to confront Keeper with this story he was told, demanding that she stop being friends with the guy involved. Keeper informed him that she didn't believe the story and it had nothing to do with her even if it was true. Deric then started to say very rude and hurtful things to Keeper, trying to find anything to upset her.

3) Keeper informed us via Guildchat what was going on. Audie, Starkset & myself decided to go there to see what his issue was and to ask him to just leave her be.

4) As we arrived at ME cantina, the game crashed on me due to lag as we were entering the cantina. I was unaware of anything that happened during the time it took me to get back in the game. However, when I loaded back in I noticed that Audie was engaged in a fight (via group stats). By the time i actually entered the cantina Audie had been killed by Deric. As I got inside enough to visually see Deric, Starkset had already engaged him in combat (Deric was SF Imp, so Audie and Stark went SF to fight him) and shortly after was defeated by Deric.

5) Deric then began a huge rant about how he could beat any and all KS Jedi, how we all sucked and he was god, etc etc. I then informed Deric (now in a packed cantina & the return of Audie and Starkset from the local cloning facility) that I was not going to stand for what he did to Keeper nor him killing Audie and Stark who came to her aid & that he was about to die.

At this time Deric began to try to explain himself / weasel out of the whole situation (all along trowing verbal shots at all KS Jedi) for which I replied by repeatedly informing him he was about to die. I went SF and prepared to wait the 5 minutes for that to activate (during this time is when I'm assuming he called his 2 friends to come to his aid). After some more KS bashing / trying to weasel outa fighting me, I again informed him he was about to die and no matter what he said or did it would not change my mind.

He then finally accepted my duel request (before the SF timer was done) in which I did what I told him and everyone else was going to happen, I incapped him. But right before I could DB him, he typed /end duel. Everyone in the cantina laughed at him and cheered knowing he wussed out of being killed. At that time (while i was healing back up) I was attacked from behind by his friends Ryan and Noto. Unknown to me at that time, Audie and Stark had both gone back SF and their timers were complete. They jumped on Ryan and Noto giving me the break i needed to incap and DB Noto. We then chased Ryan outside where he ran away from us using a lightning rifle instead of his saber to try and keep us at bay. Eventually I caught up to him, incapped him and DB'd him. We then went back to the cantina where Audie was engaged in combat with Deric (who went SF after his buddies saved him). Me and Stark joined the fight and together easily defeated Deric.


My plan was to talk to Deric and work things out. Until that point I had no problems with the guy. But once I reloaded the game and saw 2 KS members were slain, I had no other moral choice but to kill the slime!

Someone can verbal bash me all they want, but to verbaly bash Keeper to the point she was crying and then to bash Kindred Spirits is something I could not sit idly by and allow to continue. At no time did I say anything to Deric other than the fact I was about to kill him and nothing he could say would stop that (which I lived up to that promise) & how I felt that his comments concerning KS and the killing of 2 of my guildmates would not be tolerated by me.

I am pretty sure most of you would have done the same thing had you been in my shoes

-- Edited by Menis at 10:40, 2007-03-19

-- Edited by Menis at 10:42, 2007-03-19

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:D the tale will never die :P

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The good ones never do

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we have our moments :P

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Heheh wish i could pvp then how i can pvp now :D

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