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Bad Web Mistress

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Communety Song..


Heya :) Well we got muuuuch topics liek.... one word Story and so on. Thats the next one. U all know that i build up a Band with a few Friends. Our Music is Rock'n Roll like Guns'n Roses, Velvet Revolver, Foo Fighters, Goo Goo Dolls and so on.

So we have some own written textes and we r trying to play our own songs *g*

Last night i got the Idea..... Lets Write a song of much Differrent people.... Well than i remember at the one Word Story and i wanted to ask u all for this....

Ok! I know its not as easy to write songs but i'll try it...
Everyone can add a line....
If u think its time for a chourse than make a (chourse) and if u think the chourse is good in this way make a (/chourse)...

Sounds maybe a bit Complicated :P but iam sure that u'll do it....

Oje... now i have to start with the first Line to Start the Project. Lets have a Look how this one works... and i want to know of ure response *g*!!!

[ Ah and pls correct me if iam writing in a wrong english... Thaaaaaaaaaanks ]

(SongText-FirstVerse)

You have to get up every morning...




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.. sad to leave your beds embrace...

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...You Listen to the Birds outside....

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... wishing you had a gun some place...

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...it's getting on ure nerves....

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Starky's cool name when he comes up with one

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.... and you feel the rage well up inside.....

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Weird Blue

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please remind i tould u something

-- Edited by Nilky at 14:38, 2006-08-18

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Sage

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time for birds to die!!

chorus

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Bad Web Mistress

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(chours)

When i was Young.....

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the feathers flew, the bullets too, I remember..

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....this time , cause it was really fine....

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happy those birds aren't mine


 


 



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Weird Blue

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yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

*chorus ends*

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the coffees boiling, the eggs are poaching,

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smelling the bread roll in the stove

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but still that damn pigeon keeps on a cooing.

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U go crackers, u cant hear it anymore

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gonne kill them ALL like we did before

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Weird Blue

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time for chorus ;)

Nixy wrote:

(chours)

When i was Young.....




Jibb wrote:


the feathers flew, the bullets too, I remember..




Me wrote:



....this time , cause it was really fine....




Gyd wrote:



happy those birds aren't mine


Me wrote:



yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

*chorus end*







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So I sit in the window, bread knife in hand

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silently waiting for one of those birds to land

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reflexes twitching, senses on edge,

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i can not hold it


here birdie catch



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Starky's cool name when he comes up with one

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the knife doe's fly, and the blood doth flow

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Weird Blue

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awesome man! i killed 7 in a row :P

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(chorus)

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(chours) 2 times

Guitar Solo

(Chours)

(Outro)

(End)



Yeaaaaaah :P

Thats a very nice song about killing Birds :P
Now i know that this was a nice Idea.... The other Members of my band think its a nice song too.

Hmmm anyone of u have an Idea for a Name ?

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Dawn Chorus

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ok for all.. here the coplete text....

And pl create a few possible names for it... i'll make a poll after a few replies ^^


You have to get up every morning

sad to leave your beds embrace.

You Listen to the Birds outside

wishing you had a gun some place

it's getting on ure nerves

and you feel the rage well up inside

please remind i tould u something

time for birds to die!!


(chours)

When i was Young
the feathers flew,
the bullets too,
I remember this time,
cause it was really fine
happy those birds aren't mine
yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

(chorus ends)


the coffees boiling, the eggs are poaching,

smelling the bread roll in the stove

but still that damn pigeon keeps on a cooing.

U go crackers, u cant hear it anymore

gonne kill them ALL like we did before


(chours)

When i was Young
the feathers flew,
the bullets too,
I remember this time,
cause it was really fine
happy those birds aren't mine
yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

(chorus ends)


So U sit in the window, bread knife in hand

silently waiting for one of those birds to land

reflexes twitching, senses on edge,

u can not hold it

here birdie catch

the knife doe's fly, and the blood doth flow

awesome man! U killed 7 in a row


(chours)

When i was Young
the feathers flew,
the bullets too,
I remember this time,
cause it was really fine
happy those birds aren't mine
yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

(chorus ends) 2x


(Guitar Solo)



(chours)

When i was Young
the feathers flew,
the bullets too,
I remember this time,
cause it was really fine
happy those birds aren't mine
yeah im happy these birds arent mine......

(chorus ends)


(Outro)




edit: hmm the 3rd Verse could become a Bridge *g*



-- Edited by Nixy at 10:46, 2006-08-24

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the 3rd verse is not structurally strong enough to be a bridge, it could perhaps, be used as a stool, or at a puch, a bed, but not a bridge.

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